maybe it was just
everything you said, but it made me think
that a whole new way of talk
had been invented, and I was
trying to catch up, to
contribute, only
you knew
the key to it all, but
maybe it was just
everything you said.
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Ah, this is one of those short poems of yours that I like so much. It packs in a lot in a handful of words. My favorite bit (that is the part that really pulls this all together) is, "but it made me think that a whole new way of talk had been invented." I enjoy a conversation that elicits such a feeling. Well done.
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