A Pocketful of Poesy was and is again a Poem-a-Day(-on-Average) Blog! For 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, and now for 2017 and going forward, you may expect to see 365 poems every year, 366 for leap years.

but aren't they all random?

Monday, June 20, 2011

"bargain"

this girl
has left her soul behind
complete with halo, framed
in glass

and priced to sell at $1.99 -

her gaze indicting all
who pass

17 comments:

dogimo said...

This is a new thing for me; I should explain. I was on Tess Kincaid's fine poetry and raw human sensibilities blog Life at Willow Manor. A post entitled "$1.99" arrested my attention with a black and white photo of a woman. Oh just go and click on it! Look at it and read the poem underneath! I left a comment saying I was ripping off the subject matter for a poem of my own, and I did so (see above).

Then I noticed that this was exactly what I was supposed to do:

Magpie Tales #70 Writing prompt.

Fished in.

Tess Kincaid said...

Yes! It was exactly what you were supposed to do. And so glad you did. A very fine and facile poem, my friend.

Christine said...

Nice, I am not too perceptive today and totally missed the 1.99 on the photo.

Sioux Roslawski said...

Well, Dogimo, welcome. Once you've gotten hooked writing a Magpie Tale, you'll never, ever bail! (Lame, I know.)

I liked the idea of her gaze indicting the passersby.

Glenn Buttkus said...

Joe, nice clean and specific
poem for a take on the image
prompt. Native Americans would not
let their images be taken for fear
part of their soul may depart.
Like your lines /her gaze indicting
all/who pass/. Welcome to the Circle
of Tess, where magpies are allowed
to speak in their own voices.

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

that's short yet full of meaning...

i like it!

JJRod'z

Reflections said...

Oooh, nice... love the ending!

dogimo said...

Thank you so much folks for the encouragement, the kind words and the welcoming embrace!

I should #1 pay more attention, and #2 try to do more of those!

365 is a far docket to fill up every year, I need all the inspiration I can get after all.

Kay L. Davies said...

Welcome to the mistress that is magpie. You're going to love it, just as we already love your poem.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Tess Kincaid said...

Hey, it's a party over here! I'm glad your poetry is getting some well deserved exposure, Joe.

dogimo said...

What a sweet group of people!

You know Tess, I had seen the Magpie thing, but I don't think I realized it was you running things there! What a great idea: inspiration, ready-made.

I will try to pop an eye on each week's prompt at least. With me, prompts are very hit-or-miss, it just depends on whether my brain lurches into motion or not. But I'll certainly try to goose it!

Margaret said...

Yes, she was a bargain at $1.99. It was a crime to pass it up, but Tess "made good"! :)

Tumblewords: said...

fine work - strong ending...

Anonymous said...

I love that first stanza, this a beautiful piece one of the best short poems I've read. Excellent!

Templeton's fury said...

welcome! thanks for the great addition

Anonymous said...

superb.


share 1 to 3 poems with poetry potluck week 41 today.

Anonymous said...

superb.


share 1 to 3 poems with poetry potluck week 41 today.