Avast the lonely albatross
has took to skimming just above
the cresting chop
for miles and miles
he has a death-wish, yes
he does.
or butt your stupid nose
out, pal! He might just
love an accidental swim?
Somehow, and
like
to practice
and perfect
that low-down glide
that he gets in,
with nary a flap
or tilt of wing
for miles and miles
of salty time,
so what the heck?
That albatross: no lonely bird!
He does it: fine.
For lonely is not solitude.
And solitude
takes practice, see?
Slung just above the icy waves
by ancient rime for miles and days
For lonely keeps old company
with missed and gone, forevermore
- and often treats its guesting ghosts
so bitterly, so rude. With not a drop
of gratitude
to break the surface, plumb
the depths or lilt another inch
above the crashing roar
No need of why.
To play with it, awhile, since
we've got to fly
Ah,
here's
the shore
A Pocketful of Poesy was and is again a Poem-a-Day(-on-Average) Blog! For 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, and now for 2017 and going forward, you may expect to see 365 poems every year, 366 for leap years.
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Monday, January 01, 2024
Avast the lonely albatross
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2 comments:
Some birds just like to dip under the radar, maybe!
No need to assume the saddest and worst, most pitiable interpretation about a grand sea bird - why? Just to make oneself feel better by comparison with one's own imagined, projected, assigned-to-others bummers?
Well, maybe not that. Could be something less pathetic!
New thing in 2024. Partly as a trick to trim/edit, partly as a GOOSE to conversation (which has long flagged sadly since I abandoned this place, ages ago), I propose to redact less-than-top material, musings and commentary from within the poem - and reposition these things as "comments" UNDER the poem! Why not?
It's a tad dastardly, I warrant, but I hold myself free to do it in this place. Might make the pruning and tuning a bit more keyed-in.
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