In addition to possibly trimming within
more
and potentially eschewing certain kinds
of self-referential free verse bits
and pieces
(or imposing a requirement: that
such
be RHYMED AND METERED,
at least) I might also
begin
experimenting
more
with "deliberate external
rhyme." I.e. a rhyme
scheme or beat
picked up and carried on
from one poem
to the next. Or recurring,
cropping up in and between
neighboring poems: a word here,
word there, towards the beginning
of one,
carried as an echo from the end
of one. Another one. You know.
Just a lil' bonus "easter egg"
scheme for serial readers! A
little bonus jiggle in your
context
keyhole!
That is, if I remember
this intention later, as we go.
We'll see what happens.
Let's shoot for June
for an update/review
moon
spoon
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