There's some arhythmic dissonance
-no. Try again.
There's some jumble and slip
in the third stanza's meter
- deliberate.
Whether it works or not IS
equally valid in the call of each
individual. I am adamant about this:
my judgment does not, cannot overrule
or outrank the judgment of any individual
in the matter or effect of a poem of mine.
We are each-all-own equal in judgment.
That’s a demonstrable fact, but I digress
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