Friday, October 13, 2023

Reflexive reflection in self-critique.

Man

trust me 

to take a dump 
in the middle of a 
pretty-good otherwise 
poem, 

right? Right
or wrong, it's
did and done. Cool
as a beast in heat 
with no mate 
in sight. 

UNCOOL insight,
potentially. Or it could be
alright, or it might 

be a big shot crack off 
the broken back
of a baseball bat,  
flying out of sight 

foul,
but just

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