When you take your hand,
plunge it into your chest
breaking your rib cage
on the way through
to grip and seize
your heart
and draw it forth fresh,
beating and dripping, that's
some grisly stuff, there buddy.
Hint hint: try metaphor instead.
More heartfelt nods and appreciation.
Less
screaming
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