Wednesday, October 12, 2022

because awesome

I love you when you 
fucking interrupt yourself
midpoint right through what's
inevitably, clearly going to be
a really good point -

'Cause your eyes got wide and wise,
to see the much better point
you could make,
shape,

rise -

And I'm hit!
skewered!
pierced!
with it 

Surprise! No, 
of course I would be,
but 
with loving attention paid
to point made, I wanna
draw you back, 
your attention to
the point you
broke in half.

Yes! The point you made! 

Valid point - good point, 

that last.
But 

Where were you going with 
the other one?
And despite how I point to
original basis and aim, the trajectory
tracked, that you cracked, broke
to sunder and maim,
for your sudden-discovered 

new point! To make! 

- I cannot get you to revisit 
what has now become 
"Irrelevant. 
Fake." 

(to you)

Why I love that 
is up for argument, but 
I say: it's because awesome. 

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