Man! This poem’s central
figure’s
got all the deadpan moxie
of a film noir gumshoe narrating
some downbeat offhand just-facts
myth/backstory to fill idle spaces
between cases.
Great tonal shifts.
Tension in it.
Flaws, pause, causes and all.
Thank you for putting it so
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