Tuesday, December 08, 2020

sure feeling w/critique

I feel so sure 
about us. It's a little peculiar, 
but maybe only because I am. 
You are comparatively sound, 
sane, normal - sensical, wrung 
in reason and with truth rung
like bells a few rungs up the ladder 
from where I fell - but I emphasize, 

only by comparison could I say 
all that. Otherwise or not at all 
wise, I'd admit (though I wouldn't
have to) the whole thing is odd. 

And it isn't. That's what makes it 
so odd. That I'd admit it when 
it isn't. Anyway, I have to admit 

it is, odd. That I feel so sure 
I mean. About us. 

But I do! 

Weird. 

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