maybe it was just
everything you said, but it made me think
that a whole new way of talk
had been invented, and I was
trying to catch up, to
contribute, only
you knew
the key to it all, but
maybe it was just
everything you said.
Ah, this is one of those short poems of yours that I like so much. It packs in a lot in a handful of words. My favorite bit (that is the part that really pulls this all together) is, "but it made me think that a whole new way of talk had been invented." I enjoy a conversation that elicits such a feeling. Well done.
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