the way the music was clean, staccato
minimalistic,
uplifting from the edges
without obscuring the simple and explicit
delivery.
I find myself unconsciously mimicking a little bit,
internal rhyme and scheme-flipping,
putting the rhyme where you didn't expect
and then skipping the next
one.
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