Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Wow

you slide along me, like
a squeak and thrill
of fingertip on strings
along chunk chug chords
with drive, in a line
and nothing but beat
coming up behind

well you can't stop now,
and neither can I but
this is nothing like beautiful music
we make

since we're not recording,
we'll play back the tape
and fix everything, perfect
and fake

in one take

1 comment:

  1. This imagery is perfectly woven in without belaboring. It is seamless.

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