Monday, August 09, 2010

If I was bees

If I was bees
I wouldn't care
if I was here
and you was there.
I'd serve the queen
'cause that's the thing
bees does.

If you was here
I'd build a hive
and dance to welcome you inside
and then we'd buzz,

'cause that's the thing
bees does.

1 comment:

  1. Revised today. Prior version:

    If I was bees
    I wouldn't care
    that I was here
    and you was there
    I'd serve the queen
    'cause that's the thing bees does

    if you was here
    I'd build a hive
    and nudge you 'til you went inside
    and then we'd buzz

    'cause that's the thing bees does

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    The original line was "and sting you 'til you went inside"

    - now that's not nice!

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